your heart will eat my heart
and we will fall into simply
knowing
each other,
and stagger
carefully
together,
to break the paths we set
for ourselves
and lie together.
your heart will eat my heart and we will fall into simply knowing each other, and stagger carefully together, to break the paths we set for ourselves and lie together. |
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Well done!
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!Bad Bunnies!
This tells the same story in many different ways, with many different conclusions and intents.
It's every bit as wonderful as every other piece of yours I've ever seen.
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Says he's a poet
This time he's gonna blow it
'Cause he's dancing with his ego
I took a vow of silence
When he reads his work to me
I swallow words like a placebo
-Flesh Mechanic, Placebo
Because I see more in it, and it starts to mean more to me.
The diction is just beyond incredible.
The way it's written, how everything is structured, it just gets into my brain and doesn't go away.
Out of boredom, I compiled a whole stack of "the best of the best" from my favorites. And I think the MAJORITY (by technical mathematical terms) belongs to you.
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Says he's a poet
This time he's gonna blow it
'Cause he's dancing with his ego
I took a vow of silence
When he reads his work to me
I swallow words like a placebo
-Flesh Mechanic, Placebo
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