Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


your heart will eat my heart
and we will fall into simply
knowing
each other,

and stagger
carefully
together,

to break the paths we set
for ourselves

and lie together.
©2006-2009 ~andsomethingelse
:iconandsomethingelse:

Author's Comments

or
"something about someone some of us may possibly know."

there may be an image to accompany it later. perhaps. scanners suck.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 1 1 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconhezekiah:
Subtle, sweet, yet gutting still... Very lovely.

Well done!

:)

--
!Bad Bunnies! :ninjastar::jackdirt: !Bad Bunnies!
:icontwister8138:
I love how many things this says with only thirty words. 26 if you don't count repeated words.

This tells the same story in many different ways, with many different conclusions and intents.

It's every bit as wonderful as every other piece of yours I've ever seen.

--
Says he's a poet
This time he's gonna blow it
'Cause he's dancing with his ego
I took a vow of silence
When he reads his work to me
I swallow words like a placebo
-Flesh Mechanic, Placebo
:iconandsomethingelse:
thank you, you wonderful person. this was one of the easiest things i've ever written. you know how sometimes the words just fall out, and you don't even have to think about it?
:icontwister8138:
This is one of those poems that I love more and more each time I read it.

Because I see more in it, and it starts to mean more to me.

The diction is just beyond incredible.

The way it's written, how everything is structured, it just gets into my brain and doesn't go away.

Out of boredom, I compiled a whole stack of "the best of the best" from my favorites. And I think the MAJORITY (by technical mathematical terms) belongs to you.

--
Says he's a poet
This time he's gonna blow it
'Cause he's dancing with his ego
I took a vow of silence
When he reads his work to me
I swallow words like a placebo
-Flesh Mechanic, Placebo
:iconandsomethingelse:
And i am, of course, truly honoured.

Details

November 3, 2006
341 bytes

Statistics

6
1 [who?]
128 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map